Couples shot, polish - Rami

Hey everyone! Here some more polish work on my couples shot for some feedback.

Thanks in advance!

http://syncsketch.com/playground/884889eb083d4fd6a0b9aedbd25f8a6f#51424

-Rami

Selen-Dialog

Hi guys,

I applied the notes given in class, it would be great if you could check and give me some new notes.
http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/c9ad28b1395246dba08cbd973add10de

Does he look like he's looking at his hand instead of thinking at frame 210?

Best
Selen

Cody - New Pantomime Blocking

Hey Victor! I've started to put in some blocking for my new shot, as well as trying out some new staging. I'm hoping to include the confusion at first that you were talking about, where he doesn't really remember what record it is until it starts playing. Do you think this is a good way to show that?

Also, do you think there's too much business for a subtle shot?

As always, thank you for the advice! Looking forward to your feedback.

http://syncsketch.com/playground/517bb71172ce490d8fe0735c2ba1edf0#51248

Sour Candy Shot...

Hi everyone,

I've uploaded my latest Sour Candy shot for your review...

http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/96dda6168d5c46168163eceba664cbc7

Draw overs and notes welcome!

Thanks,
Mike

P.S.: Let me know if the sound doesn't work or if the playback skips.

Cody - Cowboy Shot

Hey Victor! Here's the latest polish of the cowboy shot: http://syncsketch.com/playground/882cc2a374cb418b89c060bb69b98ecc#50873

Thanks for all the draw-overs! They're really helping.

Selen-Dialog

Hey everyone,

Happy Halloween! Here is a link for my ip version of the dialog animation.

I'd appreciate if you guys could check and let me know if there is any part where it is unappealing or out of character or pushed too much, or maybe a part that needs to be pushed more.

http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/e4dd0dae7a8e4a2db7180c264c9e6f3a

I need to work lot more on it, especially on the last 100 frames. It would be great if I could get some feedback to know if I am going on the right direction. Any feedback/sketches will be appreciated, feel free to state the obvious mistakes too, I might have missed it or haven't worked on it yet but either way it will help.

Cheers
Selen

Rami - notes from class

Hey everyone, here's a update on my shot after the notes from class.

I was curious if her head rotate screen right, when she says "nothings wrong", feels like too much is going on at that moment; or if it feels fine. It's just what I kept acting out when my head settled from the weight shift as well as trying to accent the dialogue just a bit.

Thanks in advance, see you all Wednesday!

http://syncsketch.com/playground/f50695f0d4e54d9f8e3d5bf500c734dd#50060

P.S.
I know its tomorrow, but, happy early birthday Victor!

-Rami