Bruna - Polishing

Alriiiight!

Polished all the notes from last class.

http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/349f17437ad6471da68e25322998deff#52606

any other comments?

thanks in advance!
=)

Rami - More polish

Hey everyone, here's some more polish work from my shot after the notes from last week. As well as adding stuff from the polish lecture.

Thanks in advance for any notes!

http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/7fd0bcf566754d939794dd82994d7f0c#52597

-Rami

New Pantomime Idea...

Hi Everyone,

I wanted to propose a new pantomime idea.

http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/5c17b9d5c85d4f548409d81e565c9b2c

It's an idea of an older cowboy that is ready to mount his horse and ride home for the night. Suddenly he gets hit with a sleeping dart in the arm or the neck and as he checks around to see where it came from he falls asleep off his horse.

I like it because I would like to show something physical with acting and a character reacting under a condition such as a sleeping dart.

Let me know what you think and if you don't I will continue to work on another idea.

Thanks so much!,
Michael

Holidays.

Hi Everyone,

This is a dialog shot that I worked on with victor last semester that I would like to finish up.

http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/869ca3e09aea4ec5877d7f901eabac95

The scenario is a lonely man that visits this bar quite often. He's kicked back a drink and now hes describing the holidays to the bar tender.

The mouth is just up and down right now so my next task is to really dial into those mouth expressions and mouth shapes of the dialog.

 Let me know your thoughts and feedback.

-Mike

Sour Change

Hi Everyone,

I wanted to post my latest revisions for your feedback and notes.

http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/a6b460ef0896486eb78d3ff83f21898f

I feel like its almost there but I need to finish separating the parts of the swallow and giving the smile a clear beat of its own.

Thoughts, Notes, and Draw overs are welcome!

Thanks,
Michael

Cody - Pantomime Blocking+

Hey everyone!

I've been working more on my shot this week, trimming the beginning and end, fixing some staging problems, and trying to convey how he feels after the initial reaction of surprise. There are a couple things I'm not sure about.

Now that I look at the playblast, the timing seems a little slow to me. Maybe it's just because I haven't polished up the physical stuff, or because he's an old man. Maybe I've just been looking at it too long. What do you guys think about the timing?

I'm also not sure about some of the phrases. I'm trying to set it up like Victor said last week, where we see his initial surprise, see him recalling memories, and then see how he feels about those memories. Is it getting across, or should I push it a little further? Any pose, timing, or acting notes would be really helpful. Thanks guys!

http://syncsketch.com/playground/f93ad3b401954e9090b2b2d08e8f925a#52498

Bruna - Polishing

Hello guys,

so this is the point where 1- I cannot see the mistakes anymore and 2- I don't know what else I can do.

Victor, heeelp.   Lol


http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/73036bb53fc24904bb8180ffd21f3557#51702


feedback is very much appreciated. =)