Hi Bruna, the new timing is working better. A couple of other notes: - I feel like you've separated the movement of the hand and the lean in too much now. The hand moving into the popcorn feels a bit mechanical, is not tied to the shoulder/chest, and stops before the lean starts. Try to overlap the grab and lean more. - The laugh starts in the body before the face. The expression change should lead the body movement by at least a frame - I think you could still take a frame out between 33 and 36 just to sharpen that first explosion a bit more.
Hi Bruna, the new timing is working better. A couple of other notes:
ReplyDelete- I feel like you've separated the movement of the hand and the lean in too much now. The hand moving into the popcorn feels a bit mechanical, is not tied to the shoulder/chest, and stops before the lean starts. Try to overlap the grab and lean more.
- The laugh starts in the body before the face. The expression change should lead the body movement by at least a frame
- I think you could still take a frame out between 33 and 36 just to sharpen that first explosion a bit more.
Good work!