Sunday, October 25, 2015

Rami - Couples shot

Hey everyone, I worked on the notes from class and can use some fresh eyes. I still haven't worked on lip sync yet. I'm wondering if her gesture should be sharper when she jerks her arm away from him?

Thanks!

http://syncsketch.com/playground/1537599218594315bef46d41bb96a22d#48870
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  1. UnknownOctober 25, 2015 at 5:09 PM

    Hey Rami,
    Looking good! Maybe she can take a small step towards screen right, a little away from him when she's pulling her arm? Just a tiny step, not a big one. It might support the weight shift you're doing there also will make the action sharper. Thanks for sharing!
    Selen

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  2. UnknownOctober 25, 2015 at 8:22 PM

    Hi Rami, how are you doing?

    My note: When she pulled out the hand, it needs more energy ( Between 43 to 56) . The root can use a bit of translation to the right screen direction and a bit of rotation as well .

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  3. Victor NavoneOctober 25, 2015 at 10:09 PM

    Hi Rami, looking good! As the others said, she needs a bigger weight shift to SR. I did some sketches for other notes, too.

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  4. UnknownOctober 26, 2015 at 3:03 PM

    Thanks for all the notes!

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