Hey guys!
I got a chance to address the notes for my cowboy shot tonight, and I'm hoping to get it pretty polished this week. I've been working a lot on the dialogue at the end, but is there anything else in the shot that sticks out that needs to be worked on? Let me know! Thanks!
http://syncsketch.com/playground/ae262421c0794926821ba73035dc9d13#48605
Hey Cody, its looking great!
ReplyDeleteThe only note I have is to pinch the corners of the mouth just a tiny bit more on the "your" and maybe get into the "your" mouth shape about 1 frame sooner.
-Rami
Cody , looks awesome!!!
ReplyDeleteI love everything, the set etc. I wonder, what if he has a different expression at the very end (closing).
But maybe that just me. I think you know better what is in his mind.
Great work, man!
Francis
Nice work, Cody. I did a couple of mouth shape drawings. Make sure the top lip doesn't feel like it's stuck to the top teeth during dialog. Also, the eye flare on "walked" hits a little hard. Add a little cushion to the lids opening. I'll have a couple more noodly notes on Wednesday, but this is in good shape.
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