A private blog for Victor Navone's "Advanced Animation Critique" class at the Animation Collaborative, fall 2015 session.
Hi Bruna, the new timing is working better. A couple of other notes:- I feel like you've separated the movement of the hand and the lean in too much now. The hand moving into the popcorn feels a bit mechanical, is not tied to the shoulder/chest, and stops before the lean starts. Try to overlap the grab and lean more.- The laugh starts in the body before the face. The expression change should lead the body movement by at least a frame- I think you could still take a frame out between 33 and 36 just to sharpen that first explosion a bit more.Good work!