Monday, October 12, 2015

Bruna - emotion change Revised

Hello people!

I tried to hit all the notes from last class... hope it is better.

any feedback is very much appreciated.  Thanks,


1 comment:

  1. Hi Bruna, the new timing is working better. A couple of other notes:
    - I feel like you've separated the movement of the hand and the lean in too much now. The hand moving into the popcorn feels a bit mechanical, is not tied to the shoulder/chest, and stops before the lean starts. Try to overlap the grab and lean more.
    - The laugh starts in the body before the face. The expression change should lead the body movement by at least a frame
    - I think you could still take a frame out between 33 and 36 just to sharpen that first explosion a bit more.

    Good work!