Sunday, October 25, 2015

Rami - Couples shot

Hey everyone, I worked on the notes from class and can use some fresh eyes. I still haven't worked on lip sync yet. I'm wondering if her gesture should be sharper when she jerks her arm away from him?



  1. Hey Rami,
    Looking good! Maybe she can take a small step towards screen right, a little away from him when she's pulling her arm? Just a tiny step, not a big one. It might support the weight shift you're doing there also will make the action sharper. Thanks for sharing!

  2. Hi Rami, how are you doing?

    My note: When she pulled out the hand, it needs more energy ( Between 43 to 56) . The root can use a bit of translation to the right screen direction and a bit of rotation as well .

  3. Hi Rami, looking good! As the others said, she needs a bigger weight shift to SR. I did some sketches for other notes, too.